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It's dark here
And I'm wandering
Through coloured halls with eyes that follow me

Shadows lurking
Petals falling
And all these sudden wounds are crippling me

But in front of my eyes a figure begins shifting
Crimson moves, could I possibly be dreaming?
As I feel my body entangled in thorns
And I collapse within a nightmare of fabricated beauty

My eyes decieve me
A child calls out to me
And a colorful world erupts around my memory

What sort of twisted mind could create a world so cruel and fascinating?
In which dazzling monsters bargain for each other's souls
Where blood runs like acrylic paint
And heavy hearts drag behind jealous smiles

My hands are shaking
As I hold them out to you
Escape with me, I promised that I'd rescue you

But outside of this strange dream
Would you even remember me?
I suppose you'll just have to take my hand and see
So I wrote a poem/song/whatever thing for the game Ib, because it is flawless. It's from Garry's point of view. :)
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:iconshironekochandesu:
shironekochandesu Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH QAQ
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
Ahh thank you! ^^;
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:iconthealmostrose:
TheAlmostRose Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
:3 :3 :3 :3 :3
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
xD I didn't think this was very good and it got so many comments it's embarassing ^^;
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:iconthealmostrose:
TheAlmostRose Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I thought it was cool! And at this moment, exactly 100 favorites. :D
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
ASGJALMTHJAOJH

that's craycray

.___.

I'm gonna go hide off in a corner somewhere
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:iconthealmostrose:
TheAlmostRose Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Annnnddd you just recently got 20K page views. Look at you! Stats through the roof. All famous and whatnot. ;)
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
ahhhhhh noooooooo *hides from shame*
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Neghya Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I truly enjoyed playing this game, so much that I actually played it more than three times. >3<;

Anyways, I really like how you wrote this, and I feel like it captured the mood of the game fairly well. Keep up the awesome work! :heart:
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
Oh I know, I've played it so many times! It never gets old. And thank you!!
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:iconfalconhorus:
falconhorus Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Hnng, one of my favorite computer games! <3
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
I know! It's wonderful!
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:iconclaudefancypants:
Claudefancypants Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i liked that game awsome
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
Hehe, me too!
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:iconclaudefancypants:
Claudefancypants Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
yes i cant get the ending were they remeber eatch other
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
You have to make sure you talk to Garry as many times as you can in the game, and never kick the doll or the mannequin head. Certain things you do will get you the bad ending!
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Claudefancypants Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
lol i know right dont mess with the doll thought i was tempted to kick it XD but i kicked the manneauin head XD so talk to garry alot an they will remeber eatch other at the end?
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
yes, and there are other little things that affect the endings!

here, it has all of them!
[link]
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:iconclaudefancypants:
Claudefancypants Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
omg thanx XD now maybe they will remeber eatc other XD
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SnowPeakTheInsane Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ib was a great game. :)

This was very well written. Great job!
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
It is!!

Thank you!
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:icondeathripper997:
DeathRipper997 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
It's awesome. O A O
It almost reaches the perfection of the game. XD
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
Oh wow, thanks!!
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:iconnekonekogirl997:
NekoNekoGirl997 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't even know what this is based off of and I love it. It's so dynamic!
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
It's a computer game called Ib, it's fantastic! And thanks!!
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:iconnekonekogirl997:
NekoNekoGirl997 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I finally played Ib, and I love this even more now! Score!
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:iconnekonekogirl997:
NekoNekoGirl997 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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thedarkcountess24 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh! Its on the ib fanart collection! :D
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
Hehe!
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:iconpengurin:
PenguRin Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
Amazingly written <3
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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:iconpengurin:
PenguRin Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
Very welcome ♡
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:iconflotus-17:
flotus-17 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Artist
YES. JUST YES.
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
:D
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:iconhollyleaf18:
Hollyleaf18 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I already came up with a creepy melody for this. :dummy:
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
Hehe, I had one in my head while I was writing it, too!
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:iconkevinolyatt:
KevinOLyatt Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This needs to be told by a voice actor. One that might be Johnny Young Basch. xD

AWESOME JOB!!
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
Hehe ^^ thanks!!
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:iconkevinolyatt:
KevinOLyatt Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Seriously though. Hire a voice actor. o_o" THIS NEEDS TO BE DONE.
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
Haha I could totally recite it in my Garry cosplay, but I'd need to try to get a guy's voice!
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:iconkevinolyatt:
KevinOLyatt Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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:icondeathripper997:
DeathRipper997 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
I double this.
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PS2addictedlioness Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So awesome! 8D
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:iconwillowylungs:
WillowyLungs Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!!
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:iconps2addictedlioness:
PS2addictedlioness Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome! :D
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