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It's dark here
And I'm wandering
Through coloured halls with eyes that follow me

Shadows lurking
Petals falling
And all these sudden wounds are crippling me

But in front of my eyes a figure begins shifting
Crimson moves, could I possibly be dreaming?
As I feel my body entangled in thorns
And I collapse within a nightmare of fabricated beauty

My eyes decieve me
A child calls out to me
And a colorful world erupts around my memory

What sort of twisted mind could create a world so cruel and fascinating?
In which dazzling monsters bargain for each other's souls
Where blood runs like acrylic paint
And heavy hearts drag behind jealous smiles

My hands are shaking
As I hold them out to you
Escape with me, I promised that I'd rescue you

But outside of this strange dream
Would you even remember me?
I suppose you'll just have to take my hand and see
So I wrote a poem/song/whatever thing for the game Ib, because it is flawless. It's from Garry's point of view. :)
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shironekochandesu Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH QAQ
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WillowyLungs Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
Ahh thank you! ^^;
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TheAlmostRose Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
:3 :3 :3 :3 :3
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WillowyLungs Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
xD I didn't think this was very good and it got so many comments it's embarassing ^^;
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TheAlmostRose Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I thought it was cool! And at this moment, exactly 100 favorites. :D
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WillowyLungs Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
ASGJALMTHJAOJH

that's craycray

.___.

I'm gonna go hide off in a corner somewhere
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TheAlmostRose Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Annnnddd you just recently got 20K page views. Look at you! Stats through the roof. All famous and whatnot. ;)
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WillowyLungs Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
ahhhhhh noooooooo *hides from shame*
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Neghya Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I truly enjoyed playing this game, so much that I actually played it more than three times. >3<;

Anyways, I really like how you wrote this, and I feel like it captured the mood of the game fairly well. Keep up the awesome work! :heart:
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WillowyLungs Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
Oh I know, I've played it so many times! It never gets old. And thank you!!
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